[PARDON THE TYPOS]
Part 2 of the previously Untitled Story. Titled thanks to Shana.
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The two took each others hand and proceeded towards the food court in the mall. The comfort of bliss filling their hearts made it easy to walk with a smile, and quick pace. Ell locked her arm in Vin's by the time they got half-way there, and and looked up at him, biting her bottom lip. She was just begging for another kiss since their last was rudely interrupted. Vin returned her gaze when they stood in the center of the food court, surrounded by tables.
"Ell, I-"
She shook her head and lightly smiled,leaning her body closer to his in relaxation. There was another moment of silence, but this one was peaceful. Finally, Vin leaned into her and pushed her against one of the tables and claimed her lips in what she felt was the most ferocious kiss she'd ever had. In shock and confusion she opened her eyed wide, but her body seemed to know what was going on; her hands slithered up his stomach and onto his chest where she grabbed handfuls of his shirt. After a moment her mind settled and her eyes relaxed as she was eased onto the table and pushed into a laying position. Vin only caressed her body with his eyes before returning to her lips.
His hands took her wrists and placed them above her head comfortably; his right hand pinned them down, and even though she pushed against him, she did not want to be released. Vin's teeth sank into her collar bone, and Ell let out a soft cry and arched her chest into his body. As Vin assaulted her neck and collar-area, she writhed, not knowing which part of her body wanted to touch him but that she just wanted to feel him. Vin paused and snickered at the expression on her face; it was a panicked look but so serene and content. Her body continued to writhe and dance as he looked at her and when her eyes met his once again, she quickly looked off to the side and noticed a growing crowd of people staring. She gasped.
"Ell? What's wrong?"
She 'eeped' and shut her eyes tight in a heavy blush. "Look!"
Vin picked up his head and looked around at the, now, full food court of spectators. He couldn't help but blush as well. He released Ell, and they both stood, straightening out their clothing and clearing their throats.
Ell took a moment to laugh when she pointed out Vin's clearly noticeable erection, to which he cleared his throat again and tried to pull his shirt down lower. Ell grabbed his hand and rushed out of the mall. They've had enough embarrassment for today, they'd be better off getting some place more secluded; she thought.
"We'll take my car." She stated before rushing over to her small red sports car.
"What's about mine? Wouldn't it be better if I just followed you?"
She grabbed his cheeks and forced their lips together for a solid kiss. Vin widened his eyed and kept them so through the kiss. Ell broke the kiss and opened the passenger side door, without saying a word. Vin just blinked a few times then politely climbed into the car. Ell giggled in victory, closed the door and rushed over to the driver's side, climbing in the car and shoving the key in the ignition.
"Vin?"
He looked over at her without saying a word. Ell placed both hands on the steering wheel and looked directly into it's center. She didn't speak but knew he kept his eyes on her. Another moment passed and at it's end she swiftly grabbed his closest hand and slammed it onto her chest. She gasped in excitement and turned to look at him and his new surprised and confused look; she couldn't help but laugh and after doing so, she kissed him and started the car.
"We'll pick up your car tomorrow morning."
The door to Ell's apartment flung open and slammed against the wall and the two fell in, entwined in arms, lips locked. They tussled, still standing, in as they grind the wall, taking the key out of the door, closing and locking it without paying attention. Vin pushed her more firmly against the wall before parting her legs and picked her up by her thighs. Like a dance, they spun around in sheer bliss, carelessly knocking things over, the phone, a plastic vase, a picture frame on the wall, a small table; they didn't stop to pick anything up but instead headed straight for the bedroom in their tangled mess of love.
"Ell, what're we doing?"
She put a finger over his lips as he dropped her on the edge of the bed. "Don't say a word, don't think, just let the moment take hold."
He did just that, and pushed her over with the force of his kiss, putting her back into the same hold he had her in on the mall table. She didn't resist this time, but instead let out silent moans to each of his bites and kisses. Vin stood for a moment and taking the hint, Ell copied him in quickly removing her clothes.
Ell climbed to the head of the bed and laid with one arm across her chest covering what she could, and her other crossed to the center of her body with her hand between her thighs as if she was denying him his prize. He smirked and turned around.
"Where are you going!?" She quickly boasted.
"Nowhere. Just had to see your reaction." He walked over to the bedroom door and closed it with a warm smile on his face. Nothing would be better than tonight.
Sunday, February 8, 2009
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MOAR.
ReplyDeleteThere's so much of you in your stories.
ReplyDeleteI like being able to pick out your traits from your characters.
The food court part is my favorite. People do that at my work... except on the couches. But they do draw a crowd..?
hah this is pretty good, though strangely ive had a similar expirence to the foodcourt except in a museum xD
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